Author: Liu Yuzhu Instructor: Sun Yantang
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Read the material below and write as required (60 points). 【2022 New College Entrance Examination Volume II Original Essay Prediction Questions】
Material 1: On August 31, 2021, the Chinese women's volleyball team won a 3:0 victory over the Italian women's volleyball team on the field, and Lang Ping apologized to the Chinese people; on the afternoon of August 2, the Chinese women's volleyball team won 3-0 against Argentina at the end of the match, and the head coach Lang announced his resignation. However, the Chinese women's volleyball team, which lost three consecutive games, lost the opportunity to qualify in the group in advance, which is the second time that the Chinese women's volleyball team has broken down after 29 years after the 1992 Barcelona Olympic Games. The Chinese women's volleyball team, which did not enter the top eight, ranked at a new low. She said, "It's better to have some regrets, so that young people have more dreams and more desires to pursue the next goal." ”
Material two: From 2013 to 2021, Lang Ping coached the Chinese women's volleyball team for eight years, completed two Olympic cycles, won the 2015 World Cup championship, the 2016 Rio Olympic Championship, the 2019 World Cup champion, and completed the legend of the "Ten Champions" of the World Series in the history of the Chinese women's volleyball team on the basis of the brilliant achievements of his predecessors. In the player era, Lang Ping followed the coach Yuan Weimin to complete the "three consecutive championships" of the Chinese women's volleyball world championship, especially in the 1981 World Cup, the Chinese women's volleyball team became the world champion for the first time, the spirit of the women's volleyball team of "the motherland first, unity and cooperation, tenacious struggle, never say defeat" inspired generations of Chinese people, the women's volleyball team became a banner of Chinese sports, Lang Ping became an indelible synonym, forever recorded in history.
Please combine the materials to reflect your perception and reflection on the meaning of the revelation. Please write an essay of no less than 800 words on the topic of "glory and regret". Requirements: Select the right angle, determine the intention, clarify the style, and draft the title; do not pretend, do not copy; do not leak personal information.
【Upgrading Essay】
Regret eventually, the glory is recreated
At the Tokyo Olympic Games, the Chinese women's volleyball team failed miserably, which made netizens feel regret and disappointment. This emotion comes from the glory that the Chinese women's volleyball team once created, which is never forgotten. Before leaving office, Lang Dao said: "It is better to leave some regrets, so that young people have more dreams and more desires to pursue the next goal." "Yeah, who hasn't had a smooth life without setbacks?" After the wind and rain, you will see the rainbow. Regret is not terrible, what is terrible is that the shadow in the heart lingers. Only by forging ahead in regret can we create brilliance again.
Brilliant is not easy, creative spirit is even more difficult. The Chinese women's volleyball team has gone from being unknown to achieving three consecutive championships and then to ten consecutive championships, and the spirit of creation has inspired generations of Chinese people to forge ahead: "The motherland is supreme, unity and cooperation, tenacious struggle, never say defeat." "Where there are highs, there are lows. When the Chinese women's volleyball team fell into a trough, Lang Ping, who retired for ten years, served as the head coach. It took only one year to lead the women's volleyball team out of the trough and create a brilliant reputation. Behind the brilliance is the appearance of sweating hard training, and the strong will to overcome injuries. It is easy to create brilliance, and the effort behind the achievements is difficult to let go.
Giving doesn't necessarily pay off, but not paying is necessarily reaping no rewards. Although this Olympic Games has left regrets, we have reason to believe that they will regroup and create glory again, because the spirit of the women's volleyball team is inspiring them to never give up.
Brilliant for a while, arrogant and fleeting. Success is beautiful, but often beautiful is also easy to blind people's eyes and make people unable to find direction. Shi Yuzhu is a legendary entrepreneur, behind the great success, he wants to build China's tallest building in Zhuhai, although the lack of funds is difficult to do, but the pride and impetuosity, resulting in the collapse of the building, 250 million yuan in debt overnight. This is more terrible than regret, and the arrogant loss brought about by glory is even more terrible. For example, the great man Mao Zedong said: Humility makes people progress, and pride makes people backward.
Regret drives progress, and glory and arrogance have unimaginable consequences. Humility makes people re-recognize themselves and know others. Because of the times and what society is changing, where is the unchanging truth? The story of the pride that made Ma Mo lose the street kiosk has been passed down through the ages. It is always more likely to leave some regrets than brilliant arrogance, because it is unknown to learn the lessons, regain confidence, and start again.
Regret sometimes, forge a lifetime. In the Olympic Games, athlete Oscar Figueroa participated in four Olympic games in 12 years and finally won the gold medal. 12 years is even more brutal for athletes. How many 12 years of life? He can devote his energy to chasing dreams. He has regretted and wavered, but he persevered to have today's glory. Because there is a faster, higher and stronger Olympic spirit support! Too many people lose not to the success of others, but to the abandonment of their own. Facts tell us that it is no big deal to leave regrets, as long as you are like a nail always working in one direction, the glory is still yours after all!
The young people of our time should learn the spirit of the women's volleyball team, fight tenaciously and never say defeat, leave regrets to yesterday, take the pursuit as the starting point, do not retreat, do not be demanding, insist on hard work is the right way to vicissitudes, youth is used to struggle and create, not to regret.
Shenyang No. 38 Middle School, Liaoning Province, Class 7 of 2023 Liu Yuzhu Instructor: Sun Yantang
【Upgrading Guidance】 (914-943 words)
First, the original title of the article "Regrets Sometimes, Glory Will Return" is symmetrical and neat, and it is also embedded with keywords, but "finally" is reused, and it may be better to modify it: "Regret is finally sometimes, brilliant re-creation"; second, the opening quotation material is simple, the topic "glory and regret" is compared and analyzed, and finally the appropriate conclusion is drawn: Only by working hard in regret can we reach the other side of glory again. Third, this article is full of speculation, especially around the topic of "glory and regret" layer by layer, has not left the track, and comparative argumentation; fourth, the language of this article is full of personalization, which is another big highlight, which is the language literacy and key ability that the grading teacher needs: "Paying is not necessarily rewarding, but not paying must not be rewarded." "Too many people lose not to others' successes, but to their own abandonment." "Regret drives people to progress, and glorious arrogance brings unimaginable consequences." Fifth, the language should also be refined, removing the complicated words, wordy words, leaving concise exposition and reasoning, and will go up to a higher level. Sixth, we must learn to dig out the causes and reveal the causal relationship.
[sic] Regrets will eventually return, and glory will eventually return
Recently, the Chinese women's volleyball team has lost games in succession at the Olympic Games, which has made netizens feel regret and disappointment. This emotion comes from the glory of the Chinese women's volleyball team that has been unforgettable. Coach Lang Ping told everyone before leaving office: "It is better to leave some regrets, so that young people have more dreams and more desires to pursue the next goal." "Who has lived their life without setbacks? If you don't experience wind and rain, how can you see a rainbow. Therefore, it is not terrible to leave regrets, and only by working hard in regrets can we reach the other side of glory.
Brilliant is not easy, the spirit of the women's volleyball team. The spirit of the women's volleyball team is "the motherland first, unity and cooperation, tenacious struggle, never say defeat." When the Chinese women's volleyball team fell into a trough, Lang Ping, who retired for ten years, served as the head coach of the women's volleyball team. It took only one year to lead the Chinese women's volleyball team out of the trough. Once, in a game, Lang Ping fainted on the field due to excessive fatigue and when talking to the players again. All we see is the girls' glamorous appearance and the honors they have received, behind which they are sweating the training ground and their strong will to overcome injuries. It is easy to talk about brilliance, and the effort behind the achievements is unimaginable. There is not necessarily a reward for giving, but there must be no gain without giving. Although this year's women's volleyball team has left regrets, I believe that in the near future it will definitely return to glory!
Brilliant for a while, arrogant and fleeting. Success is beautiful, but often these beauty blind people's eyes and make people unable to find their way. Shi Yuzhu was a legendary entrepreneur who, after his success, was determined to build China's tallest building in Zhuhai, even though the funds at the time were not enough for him to do so. Because of his pride and impetuosity, the building collapsed, and he was in debt of 250 million yuan overnight. This is greater than leaving regrets, and the loss of brilliant arrogance is greater. Regret drives people to progress, and glorious arrogance brings unimaginable consequences. The truth that humility makes people progress, and pride makes people backward has been passed down through the ages. The regret behind the effort is always more worthy of respect than the brilliant arrogance.
Regret sometimes, trying to forge ahead. There is a man named Oscar Figueroa at the Olympics who has participated in four Olympic games in 12 years and finally won the gold medal. 12 years is a long time for the average person, but even more brutal for an athlete. How many twelve years of a man's life, he put all his energy into the pursuit of his dreams. He had wandered and regretted on this path, but none of this could shake his will. It is his ten years of perseverance that has made him brilliant today. Too many people, not to lose to the success of others, but to their own insistence. This tells us that it is no big deal to leave regrets, as long as you work hard in one direction, the glory is still yours after all!
The majority of young people should learn the spirit of the women's volleyball team, tenacious struggle never say defeat, leave regrets and do not retreat, only persistence and hard work is the standard answer to obtain brilliant.
Shenyang No. 38 Middle School, Liaoning Province, Class 7 of 2023 Liu Yuzhu