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Time and value

【Material example】

I agree with the view that "after the precipitation of time, the value of things can be recognized by people". To answer and explain: the "precipitation of time" can make people understand the reasons for the "value of things". For example, candidates can talk about the connotation of "value" and talk about the need for people to go through the investigation from the surface and the inside, from shallow to deep, from the part to the whole, in order to accurately and deeply understand the value of things. This process takes time and needs precipitation, that is, repeated self-examination, correction, supplementation, and completeness in the process of cognition, and the investigation of thinking methods is needed to obtain the true understanding of the value of things.

【American Model】

Time-quenched value

It was only ten years after the bullet had hit Van Gogh's head that his Sunflowers had been sold at a high price; Bruno had only been rehabilitated by the Pope 300 years after he had been burned to ashes in Campo de' Fiori; and his theory had been put into practice for the first time 20 years after Marx had been sleeping forever in a rocking chair. Sunflowers, heliocentrism says, the values of communism itself do not change over time, but people's perceptions of their value change over time.

If we look back at history, it is not difficult to find that the birth of the major discoveries that have changed history today is usually accompanied by the questioning of "heresy". After the success of the first plane, the Wright brothers were greeted not with flowers and applause, but with questioning and criticism. Conservative pedants did not believe that "bicycle workers" could build airplanes, but the Wright brothers continued to explore and forge ahead, and repeatedly went to the world to perform air shows and spread the seeds of aviation, and they dedicated their lives to aviation, and were later hailed as the founders of aviation. After the precipitation of time, the world finally recognized the pioneering value of the Wright brothers in the aviation industry.

There is also Darwin's theory of evolution, which was not recognized before Darwin's lifetime; when Cao Xueqin wrote "Dream of the Red Chamber", he was poor and the whole family lived on porridge; he, who graduated from college 20 years ago, applied for 30 jobs, all of which were rejected; he, wanted to be a policeman, went with his classmates, only he was not admitted; he, when the first five-star hotel in Hangzhou opened, went to apply for a waiter, and was not admitted; he, with others, applied for Hangzhou KFC, and the one who was not admitted was still him. He is the world-renowned and well-known business wizard Ma Yun more than a decade later. This confirms the famous saying that "it is gold, it will always shine", and also fully explains the correctness of the value of time precipitation.

It can be seen that the value of advanced things will not change with people's cognition and time, and its advantages are always there, just quietly waiting for people's discovery and utilization. Although there may be certain resistance, dissatisfaction, frustration and ups and downs at the beginning, it will slowly be understood, recognized and accepted by the public and society with the precipitation of time. Like the Europeans before the outbreak of the same war, no one regarded the new weapon of the machine gun as the focus of the war before the war, but because the German army purchased a large number of heavy machine guns and also gained a huge advantage in the early stages of the war, this led to the popularity of this weapon.

Therefore, it is the passage of time that objectively changes people's new understanding and understanding of the value of things. Under the impetus of time, people will begin to look at new things again and objectively, and make choices that are beneficial to themselves, and under such choices again and again, people finally usher in a change of thinking, a leap in understanding, and the approval of values.

〔Famous Teacher's Comments〕

Cases are introduced, closely buckled. This article begins with an overview of Sunflowers, heliocentric, and Marx's theory, which aims to elicit the author's view that although the value of things themselves does not change with time, people's perception of their value changes with time. The point of view is clear, concise and crisp, and the questions are deducted, which is worth learning and learning from the candidates.

The writing is smooth and in one go. After the first paragraph introduces the central argument, in the main part, the theoretical evidence is carried out in a simple and simple way, and the argument is strengthened at the end. The whole text is advanced layer by layer, step by step, complementary to each other, and the context is clear.

The material is typical and powerful. In order to profoundly and comprehensively argue the central thesis, the author uses classic, representative, ancient and modern Chinese and foreign sages and famous sentences to explain the facts, which is undoubtedly convincing.

Time will give the answer

I think that the value of things has always been related to time, and some values are presented instantaneously, while others are delayed.

The value of things is subdivided into three types: the value of things themselves, the value of things given by time and the outside world, and the value of things to the outside world.

The value of the thing itself is instantaneous. Gold, for example, its very existence determines its value. The latter two are time-delayed, they have been precipitated and tested by time, the value will be recognized, and the value will become higher and higher.

The things that can be precipitated in time are no longer just a thing, but also contain a culture and heritage that has passed through time and endured. Art and artwork seem to best reflect the characteristics of "after the precipitation of time, the value of things can be recognized by people". Whether it is the famous Renaissance paintings that symbolize the humanist revolution or the porcelain that contains Chinese culture, the stories they carry on their bodies, the emotions of human sustenance, and the inheritance, culture and skills they represent in the long river of history have affected their value.

Time is a kind of precipitation, is a kind of test, in the long river of history, the big waves and sand, left can still be remembered, it is not easy, so often out of the classic, rich in value.

However, from the perspective of human history, those most valuable things may have to wait the time to appear. One is because the big waves in the long river of history are testing; the other is because of the limitations of human cognition.

Suppose you build a bridge that might have been valuable when it was first built — it's convenient for people to get around, but what if in two years it collapses because of construction problems? Not only does it not bring value to people, but on the contrary, it brings people profound lessons and adverse effects.

"The Tao is inherently far away and stops near, there are those who are neglectful of the past and more expensive than the present, not only because of worldly likes and dislikes, but also because of their natural reasons", some things may not be accepted at the beginning, but it cannot be said that it has no value, on the contrary, it may be more valuable, but because human cognition is limited, people at that time could not understand, in today's words, this is a kind of "avant-garde".

Confucius and Mencius were very unhappy at that time, but later became an example for generations to learn and emulate; Han Yu's articles, which were buried for hundreds of years, were greatly popular in later generations; the theories of Adam Smith, the "father of modern economics" who created "The Wealth of Nations", were not adopted and accepted at first, but with the germination of bourgeoisism, his ideological value was recognized and admired.

The birth of new things is forward-moving and tortuous, and its value may not be discovered at first, but with the precipitation of time, their true value will be fully recognized...

Today's society has an impetuous situation, some people focus on short-term value, eager for short-term success, and ignore that it is the precipitation of time that makes people have a correct judgment of the value of things. The precipitation of time is so for things, so is it for people, in the face of entertainment first, quick success and short-term social phenomenon, we should calm down, accumulate ourselves, and enhance our own value.

"The jade test needs to be burned for three days, and the identification of materials needs to wait for seven years." The precipitation of time can not only give the value of things, but also test the value, so that the value of things is fully recognized.

The arguments are classic and the arguments are strong. The facts and arguments cited in this article are all sages and talents in ancient and modern China and abroad; the words quoted are all appropriate famous quotes that make the language brilliant. It is precisely because of this that the representativeness and profundity of the article's reasoning are enhanced, and the richness and breadth of the author's accumulated materials are also highlighted, which should be applauded.

The title is concise and highlights the point. The author closely draws up the topic around the given material, concise and concise, and concise. At the same time, borrowing questions to show the point of view of the article - through the questions, the reader can understand and grasp the main idea at once, which is particularly commendable for the examination room composition.

The structure is exquisite and the logic is rigorous. The whole text presents the structural layout of "total-score-total", which appears to be clearly veined, clear in thinking, logical and meticulous, and seamlessly integrated. This style of writing is convenient for the reader to know the content and summary of the article as a whole, and should be vigorously promoted.

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