Today, let's talk about the novel "Opening Sign-in to the Ancient Eucharist", author: J God Word count: 2.8 million words
Introduction: [Don't waste firewood, don't lick the dog, the sky is proud of the bully and the invincible stream]
Jun Xiaoyao traveled through the mysterious world and became the god son of the Aragami family, with an invincible background, amazing talent, and even got a check-in system, opening to sign in with a Dacheng Aragami Ancient Sacred Body.
Sign in at the Taiyue Ancient Monument and get a six-star reward, the god elephant town prison energy!
Sign in at the 10th birthday party and get a seven-star reward, Supreme Bone!
Sign in at the Bronze Immortal Hall and get an eight-star reward, the Mother of All Things! Check in at the Borderless Sea, get a ten-star reward, and he incarnates as Dafa!
Countless years later, Jun Xiaoyao sat on the Ninth Heaven, and his sword pointed at the Heavenly Dao: "Nine heavens and ten earths, my Lord sinks and floats, at the end of the Immortal Road, I am the peak!"
Personal evaluation: How to say it, this book can only be said to be barely justified for new book friends, but for those of us old bookworms can only be the class door axe, others than the chance protagonist to see the backstage, the story line of the nesting doll, a punch superhuman invincible immortal, the villain's IQ line that is less than zero, can only say that Shuangwen is not written like this, up a variety of exercises full level, five small realms at a time, a fist god form is destroyed, a little too "low-end".
Books are good, but the overall system is a bit of a parody of perfect world. Although the combat strength was much higher than that of the Perfect World at that time, it was enough to see how many immortal qi there were. So you can't become a god. The most appreciated point is that the protagonist dares to kill! Other people drooling type of women are killed. Looks pretty good. There are very few such authors.
If the description is more macro and grand, in fact, many book friends probably prefer your style to Chendong. A protagonist slips his head mainly, a tyrant kills decisively, and no one does not choose the latter. I don't like to see the heroine, after all, if I look at love, I still look at the fantasy. Because there is a point, 99% of books with female protagonists will pull down the IQ of the overall book and rationalize it.
Take stock of the poison spots
1: The protagonist is only 10 years old and begins to seduce his sister? Still older than him, the point is that they actually blushed??? Then after the age of 10, can you imagine a 10-year-old kid pretending in front of someone in his 20s???
2: Immortal Medicine Rotten Street? Give 3 plants at a time? And then you add up to 5 plants? Please, the original text of the sky more than 2 million words appeared in a total of more than 10 plants, you only more than 100,000 words appeared 5 plants? There is also 1 strain of divine medicine for a 2-stream force without loss?
3: What about worshiping Yu'er or something, and the result of the humiliation of the Jun wanru is so bad that you can put it together in a few words? Should I judge you as stupid or witty? Can you have a little brain? The most important thing is that some people say that the protagonist will play with people's hearts and minds, and I really obey.
4: Divine Elephant Town Prison, you are also too big, right? Pull the progress bar straight away? So you've always had to be full-fledged in the back. And then how do you get to play?
Overall, the worldview and power system of this book are sound. It can be seen as a fan or continuation of the perfect world, and the supreme beings in it are basically the same. Before what Jun Mo laughed, ancient freaks. It is expected to crush the younger generation. Become the Emperor, now the ultimate ancient road what ancient heavenly arrogance counts as a fart. Hopefully, there won't be any big logical loopholes. Those who are interested can take a look.