Introduction: The transition of poetry, the mood of the feeling is essential, but the connection is particularly important, without the necessary connection, it is impossible to express the corresponding theme
First look at the previous issue of Feishan poems on 1445 uplink:
A round of bright moon chanting autumn water
See which friends have a good sentence:
@ Sheng Shi Li Min 152
A round of bright moon and autumn water, ten thousand silver lanterns reflect the evening sky.
Looking at the cold palace shaking the gui shadow from afar, Chang'e dancing sleeves are happy and harmonious.
The sentence is neat and appropriate, and there is nothing wrong with turning two sentences, but they are all ordinary words, less fresh, change the perspective, and see if it can be better: but see the golden toad meets the jade rabbit, Chang'e no longer tears the cold palace.
@Lao Lu 83677
A round of bright moon chanting autumn water, thinking of hometown in the middle of the night.
Only to see the fragrance of osmanthus flowers drifting away, thoughts of thousands of tears and two lines.
The last two sentences are not very legal, just a little tidying up:
A round of bright moon and autumn water, half leaning on the railing to look at the hometown;
The strong fragrance of the laurel tree fell into a dream, and thousands of thoughts went down in tears.
@Jianping 249504053 Liu Jianping
A round of bright moon and autumn water, a hundred miles long river swinging leaf boat.
The green bamboo stars are shining, and the eagle spreads its wings and sings brightly.
The paraphrase "stars twinkling" should be used as night, and if the eagle sings brightly at this time, won't it be a night owl? Recommendation: Nightingale stretches out and sings brightly.
Look at the picture proposition poem "Rhyme", unlimited rhyme:
@ Shen Changming 3
"Night Smell Flute Rhyme"
The clear stream outside the window sings, and the birds in the village sing quietly.
Whoever flutes rhymes, accompanied by the moon is gentle.
The first two sentences suggest reversing the order to create a feeling of being near and far: the clear stream outside the door sings, and the birds in front of the window sing quietly.
@ White water a cup 9875
Only then did the red leaf inscription verses be chanted with Qingliu.
There is wine when the invitation to Lang Yue, who is humane to wash the heart?
The last two sentences still owe the necessary connection, so let's see if it works: why should you buy drunk diligently when you have wine, and don't worry about The bright moon.
@In Joe One Leaf 2
Mingquan shatters the jade forest, and the frost dew stains the maple creek red.
A song of autumn chanting rhymes, wandering can't bear to cross the east of the bridge.
Tidy it up like this to see if it's ok or not:
Mingquan crushed jade around the forest feng, leaves stained light frost creek reflecting red;
Put the wine on the wind song a song, wandering can not bear to cross the bridge east.
Well, it's time for me to make up the sentence, first of all, the sentence syntactic poem:
Sentence: A round of bright moon groans autumn water, and ping ping
Sentence: Ten thousand trees drunk in the evening wind. Ping Ping Ping Ping Ping
Sentence transfer: White hair why should I pity Xi Zhao, and the servant is flat and flat
Syndication: There is a starry sky after mulberry elm. Ping Ping Ping Ping
Sunset, into the sound, eleven strange rhymes; wind, air, flat water rhyme on the flat one east.
White hair why pity the sunset photo, there is a starry sky after the mulberry elm; the picture comes from the Internet
Rhyme, picture from the web
Look at the picture as the propositional poem "Rhyme", unlimited rhyme:
"Seven Absolutes" rhymes
The golden wind and jade dew are happy to meet each other, and the plain servants are flat
Waterfall cold red maple mist cold pine. Ping Ping Ping Ping Ping
First enjoy the Flying Stream Sonata, Ping
Listen to the spring water singing ding-dong again. Ping Ping Ping Ping Ping
Feng, pine, bang, flat water rhyme on the flat second winter.
Well, the picture comes from the internet
Well, take a look at today's outlink:
Shanglian: Clear stream can clean red dust, flat and flat
Lower link: 仄仄平平仄仄平
Polyester, into the sound, twelve tin rhymes, belongs to the voice.
Look at the picture as a propositional poem "掬", the title can add words, no limit to rhyme, five absolute seven can be.
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