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We were walking on the mountain path, and a raspberry caught my eye" Shangluo Essay Contest

Sponsored by Huashang Newspaper, Ersanli Information, Publicity Department of Shangluo Municipal Party Committee, Shangluo Municipal Education Bureau, and Shangluo Writers Association, the #Shangluo Essay Contest#, since the opening of the topic, the compositions of primary and secondary school students have been continuously released on the Ersanli information platform every day, and these compositions are brilliant and wonderful, fully demonstrating the children's keen observation and strong writing ability.

In order to encourage children's enthusiasm for writing and continue to improve their writing ability, from now on, Huashang Daily - Ersanli Information invited famous teachers to settle in and comment on excellent compositions.

"Nostalgia"

Shangzhou Qinyun Junior High School Chen Yuxin

Looking forward to it, looking forward to it, after sending away the exam papers, finally ushered in that haunting summer vacation.

On the first day of the holiday, early in the morning we packed up our things and prepared to leave for our hometown. Sitting in the car and listening to classical music, I can't help but think back to the four seasons of my hometown.

In the spring, it is full of spring and a scene of vitality. Those old trees that have grown for tens of hundreds of years still exude the brilliance of life: the poignant fallen leaves have disappeared, and last year, looking at the bare trunks, many new green shoots appeared at some point. The dust on the trunk of the tree has disappeared, and it must have been baptized by rain. The people in the village do their own work, looking forward to the autumn harvest...

In summer, it is full of flowers and bustling. Under those trees, it has long become a paradise for children, some little naughty people climb up the branches and sit on them to feel the oncoming smoke, adults sit in the courtyard, drinking strong tea, holding pu fans to cool off, and the industrious women mix a few plates of cold vegetables to nag together, feeling the beauty of xia.

In autumn, the leaves fall on the ground, enclosing the village into a city of leaves. At the same time, autumn is also the busiest time for people, and families are busy with the autumn harvest and harvesting the "hard work" they sowed. These foods taste old and flavorful. Walk in the autumn, let the autumn chrysanthemums bloom, and sprinkle laughter to the autumn wind.

In winter, the silver wrapping is the best interpretation of this place. As long as it snows, the snow will not melt in a few days, so it has become a snow city, and it has become a paradise for children, where they play snowball fights, skate, build snowmen, and in your eyes, run wild. Looking back, a few more years have passed...

Unconsciously, the car had reached the entrance of the village, and after Dad stopped the car, we couldn't wait to rush out of the car to see the changes in our hometown. The sound of rushing water echoed in my ears, and my brother and I didn't say a word, so we picked up our tools and ran to the stream, where we caught crabs and tadpoles in this clear spring water, frolicking and playing here, and I don't know how long it took to leave.

Along the way, the jingle bell spring plays a moving movement, and some different forms of stones under our feet pave an unusual road, and we walk on the path to reminisce about its former appearance. Today's village is a little less antique than before, adding a lot of fireworks in the world, but it has also made it more developed to keep up with the pace of the times, and even the scenery is a lot more beautiful.

As we walked along the mountain path, a raspberry caught my eye and evoked memories of my childhood: I walked with my friends between the mountains, and a raspberry came into view. The little raspberries are bright red, hanging from the trees like small lanterns, decorating the whole tree with great charm. I took one and put it in my mouth, a familiar sweetness swirled between my lips and teeth, and I couldn't help but pick a few more...

Walking on the edge of the countryside and seeing a few flowers quietly opening, I can't help but think of a poem: When the mountain flowers are full, she laughs in the bushes. Unconsciously, the sky had darkened, and I looked at a few stars in the sky and the bright moon, making the most beautiful memories here!

We were walking on the mountain path, and a raspberry caught my eye" Shangluo Essay Contest

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I hope that students can enthusiastically submit papers, participate in the "Shangluo Composition Competition", and show more high-quality works to everyone.

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【Submission Guidelines】

Step 1: Mobile app market search 23 Mile information download and install.

Step 2: Register or register as a user (fill in the invitation code for the first time 23264627)

Step 3: Open Positioning as Shangluo and select the Side button in the lower left corner.

Step 4: In the side options, select the topic #Shangluo Essay Contest#.

Step 5: Choose to participate in the topic discussion.

Step 6: Type directly into the page the content of the essay. Please indicate the entry, title, school, class, and author's name in the title of the manuscript, and publish it in a text version with a screenshot of the article. (Can be written on paper by the student, copied by the parents to two or three miles)

Step 7: After the composition is written, click the Send button directly in the upper right corner. (It takes a few minutes to review to publish successfully)

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Edited by Long Kexin

We were walking on the mountain path, and a raspberry caught my eye" Shangluo Essay Contest