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The student's original essay "The "Glimmer" of Hometown" is relatively readable and very good!

author:Teacher Liu's composition and Chinese studies class
The student's original essay "The "Glimmer" of Hometown" is relatively readable and very good!

In life, we will encounter all kinds of people and things. Some are abhorrent, while others are warm. In my hometown, there is a "glimmer of light" that illuminates many people!

Grandpa Li from his hometown is an old Chinese medicine doctor who is in his 60s this year. According to adults, he started to practice Chinese medicine in our village decades ago. Every morning, Grandpa Li would go to collect Chinese medicine. Sometimes there are one or two children around, and Grandpa Li is not annoyed, and always kindly teaches them how to distinguish medicinal herbs. Day after day, year after year, Grandpa Li insisted on picking herbs every day. Gradually, his fame grew! Every time he came back from picking herbs, he always smiled and said to people, "I picked the stems and trees, and when I wait until next year, the roots will grow new stems and leaves, so that there will be more herbs for everyone to heal!" ”

At noon, it was the time for Grandpa Li to boil herbs. The thick smell of medicine slowly wafted out of his home. The medicinal fragrance and the osmanthus fragrance at the door of the house are blended together, emitting a strange aroma that makes people feel refreshed!

The student's original essay "The "Glimmer" of Hometown" is relatively readable and very good!

The sun is in the west. It was when Grandpa Li went to the doctor. At that time, Grandpa Li's door was always full of people. Walking into Grandpa Li's clinic, you will always be attracted by the quaint and atmospheric decoration style. Wooden tables and chairs, pillars, medicine cabinets, etc., all exude a simple atmosphere. When people come in, they always calm down and wait!

When it came to the consultation, Grandpa Li always kindly inquired about his condition. He looked at the patient with a soft gaze, leaned forward slightly, carefully touched the patient's forehead with his slender and slender hand, and then touched the patient's pulse, and then grabbed a dose of good medicine and handed it to the patient, and the patient was all smiling!

As the sun set, the golden sunlight shone into the courtyard of Grandpa Li's house, and he also saw off the last patient! The sun shone on Grandpa Li's thin body, making him very tall, as if exuding sunshine. Grandpa Li sat on the recliner and quietly admired the osmanthus tree in front of the door......

Grandpa Li is ordinary and great, he used his thin body to benefit the people. He is like a "glimmer of light" that brings us warmth, gives us courage and the strength to move forward!

The student's original essay "The "Glimmer" of Hometown" is relatively readable and very good!

About the author of this article: Du Jiapeng, a student of Jiabang Little Writers Class;

Instructor's comments: This article is well written, the story is relatively strong, and the readability is relatively strong, which makes people quite inspired after reading it. The structure of the article is clear, the content is rich, the details are appropriate, the sentences are fluent, and the idea is high. As can be seen from this article, the little author is very good at telling stories. This is one of the most important skills in junior high school composition. Excellent!

Instructor profile: Mr. Liu, a columnist for mainstream media such as Sohu, and a writer signed by many well-known self-media. He is a member of the China Young Writers Association, a member of the Shanxi Poetry Society, a legal person of Shanxi Xinjiabang Culture and Media, the founder of the Shanxi Xinjiabang Cultural Writers Class, and the editor-in-chief of the book "100 Original Essays for Students". Ms. Liu is not only a lecturer of original composition, but also a lecturer of reading comprehension, a lecturer of classical Chinese studies, and a lecturer of parent-child education. Mr. Liu has been writing for 30 years and has published nearly 8 million words of various articles. Mr. Liu has taught more than 8,000 original compositions, reading comprehension, classical Chinese studies, parent-child education and other knowledge! Mr. Liu has cultivated more than 500 writing experts and young writers in just six years!

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