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The student's original essay "The Shade of the School" is vivid and interesting, with a strong sense of picture, which is very good!

author:Teacher Liu's composition and Chinese studies class
The student's original essay "The Shade of the School" is vivid and interesting, with a strong sense of picture, which is very good!

In my elementary school, there is a big tree that carries the happy times of my childhood.

It stands in the northwest corner of the school's backyard with a thick trunk and leafy branches. Its shade is a summer refuge in summer. Standing underneath, you will feel isolated! The sudden intrusion, intertwined with the scorching heat outside, makes people can't help but shiver.

When I was in elementary school, I was assigned by my teacher to do hygiene in the shade of a large tree. This is the toughest sanitary area! Luckily, my friend and I were sorted here. This has turned the tedious hygiene work into a daily expectation. Every morning and afternoon during reading time, we will happily clean under this big tree. It protects the fruits of my labor and allows me to carefully clean the slate floor without being destroyed.

Sometimes, it can also cause me trouble. In autumn, the wind swept in and circled around the trees twice, bringing some broken dead leaves to the ground. As soon as the sweep was finished, new leaves kept drifting down with the wind. The sun shines on the crimson, golden leaves, like the wings of a butterfly, which has a unique flavor. But the sweep still has to be swept, I can only "endure the pain" to put these beautiful butterflies in the basket!

The student's original essay "The Shade of the School" is vivid and interesting, with a strong sense of picture, which is very good!

In the spring, there are always some bugs that appear on campus, and its name is "Hanged Man". As the name suggests, it is a bug that hangs on a tree. They pick some old, thick trunks to make their home, and this big tree is one of its targets, and it is also the shadow of my childhood that I can't get rid of! Imagine that while you are sweeping the floor with your head down, suddenly a big, long, slippery green worm hangs down with a silver wire! When I looked up, I only saw it writhing and bending among the leaves, and in an instant, my scalp was numb and my whole body was shaken! And some students who are not afraid of insects use wooden sticks to pick off the "hanged ghost", and the silver thread they bring turns a few times on the wooden stick. The "hanged man" was wriggling around the sticks, and they had a lot of fun, and I thought it was terrifying!

Although it is scary under the trees in the spring, it is also a good place for us to escape the sun in the summer! It was hot outside, so he broke into the shade of the tree. Once you've had enough rest here, run out and keep having fun! This is a natural supply station!

This big tree records my growth process from a child to a teenager, and also witnesses my smiles and tears, which is an important node in my life. I love you, Tree of the Sky!

The student's original essay "The Shade of the School" is vivid and interesting, with a strong sense of picture, which is very good!

About the author of this article: Meng Xiaduo, a student of Jiabang Little Writers Class;

Instructor's comments: This article entitled "The Shade of the School" is relatively well written! The little author uses vivid, fluent and interesting words to tell the happy story of a big tree in his childhood. The article is clearly structured, rich in content, strong in pictures, and sincere in feelings, which is very good!

Instructor profile: Mr. Liu, a columnist for mainstream media such as Sohu, and a writer signed by many well-known self-media. He is a member of the China Young Writers Association, a member of the Shanxi Poetry Society, a legal person of Shanxi Xinjiabang Culture and Media, the founder of the Shanxi Xinjiabang Cultural Writers Class, and the editor-in-chief of the book "100 Original Essays for Students". Ms. Liu is not only a lecturer of original composition, but also a lecturer of reading comprehension, a lecturer of classical Chinese studies, and a lecturer of parent-child education. Mr. Liu has been writing for 30 years and has published nearly 8 million words of various articles. Mr. Liu has taught more than 8,000 original compositions, reading comprehension, classical Chinese studies, parent-child education and other knowledge! Mr. Liu has cultivated more than 500 writing experts and young writers in just six years!

Disclaimer: The pictures in the article come from the Internet, which are only for learning and reference.