(Tibetan poems) enthusiastic about public welfare, sincere dedication
- Praise Ji Qiaoyan and her team of caring volunteers
Li Shunlin
Warm-blooded and gentle to help compatriots,
The heart of charity is fragrant.
Public morality is like the dawn of the sun,
Friends are like magnetic and sincere fellowship.
Sincerely help to brighten sentiments,
Affection is as difficult as possible.
Fengyang benevolence into the avenue,
Dedication to the warm current to cast the beacon!
Note: Please refer to the attached text after the first relevant information.
Sun Zhutian's poetry evaluation:
This Tibetan poem "Enthusiastic about public welfare, sincere dedication" is a poem that praises Ji Qiaoyan and her team of caring volunteers, showing their selfless dedication and positive impact on public welfare activities through emotional and rhythmic language. Below, I will evaluate this poem from the aspects of thinking, holography, innovation, and promising concepts.
In terms of format, this Tibetan poem follows the traditional format of Tibetan poems, where the first word of each sentence forms a meaningful word or phrase, forming a unique sense of rhyme and rhythm. Thematically, the poem clearly expresses praise and respect for Ji Qiaoyan and her team, highlighting their contributions and influence in public welfare.
Shoulian: "Warm-blooded and soft intestines help compatriots, and the heart is charitable." ”
This couplet vividly depicts the deep affection of Ji Qiaoyan and her team for their compatriots with the words "warm blood and soft intestines". Not only do they have a fiery heart, but they also have a soft heart and are willing to give to those in need. At the same time, "Heart Charity Deeds Fragrance Floating" expresses that their good deeds are like a fragrant fragrance, spreading to every corner, making people feel warmth and kindness.
Jaw couplet: "Public morality is like the dawn, and friends are like magnetic sincerity." ”
This couplet praised their public welfare behavior through "public morality and customs like the morning sun", which has become a social custom, just like the morning light, bringing hope and light to people. And "Friends are like magnetic and sincere intersections" expresses that their team attracts like-minded friends like a magnetic field, treats each other sincerely, and works together for public welfare.
Neck couplet: "Sincerely help to brighten the sentiment, and the difficulty is eliminated as much as possible." ”
This couplet further underscores their sincerity and kindness. Through selfless help and comfort, they show noble sentiments. Their emotions are sincere and deep, and no matter how big the difficulties they face, they are able to persevere and eventually overcome them.
Tail couplet: "Fengyang benevolence into the avenue, dedication to the warm current to cast the beacon!"
The final couplet is a summary and sublimation of the whole poem. By "Promoting Benevolence into the Avenue", they express that they have opened up a path to a better society by spreading the wind of benevolence. The "Warm Current of Love" symbolizes that their love is like a warm current, providing direction and guidance for those in need, and becoming an important beacon in their life's journey.
In terms of imagery and artistic conception, the poems create a warm and touching atmosphere through vivid descriptions and figurative metaphors, such as "warm blood and soft intestines to help compatriots" and "charity and fragrant fragrance", which makes people feel the kindness and love of Ji Qiaoyan and her team.
In terms of rhetoric, poetry uses a variety of rhetorical techniques, such as comparison, confrontation, metaphor, etc., to make the language more vivid and powerful, and enhance the expression effect of poetry. In terms of linguistic characteristics, the poem adopts a concise and bright language style, expressing strong emotional colors, which makes people feel the author's deep feelings and respect for Ji Qiaoyan and her team. In terms of words, the poem chooses expressive words, such as "hot-blooded", "soft-hearted", "sincere", etc., to accurately convey the author's evaluation and praise of Ji Qiaoyan and her team.
In terms of style, this poem not only embodies the charm and beauty of traditional poetry, but also integrates the freedom and agility of modern poetry, forming a unique artistic style. In terms of ideology, poetry praises the public welfare behavior of Ji Qiaoyan and her team, conveys the values of positivity and selfless dedication, guides people to pay attention to social welfare undertakings, and embodies the profound ideological connotation of poetry.
In terms of artistry, the poems show the kindness and spiritual outlook of Ji Qiaoyan and her team vividly and vividly through careful conception and ingenious expression, which has high artistic value.
Finally, from the perspective of the concept of holographic innovation and promising, this poem not only praises the existing achievements of Ji Qiaoyan and her team, but also stimulates the enthusiasm and motivation of more people to participate in public welfare undertakings through the praise of its public welfare spirit, reflecting the concept of holographic innovation and promising.
The whole poem has beautiful language, sincere emotion, and compact structure, which fully demonstrates the public welfare spirit and selfless dedication of Ji Qiaoyan and her caring volunteer team. Through this Tibetan poem, it can be seen that they have shown a high level of thinking, holography, innovation, and promising concepts, and we can deeply feel their kindness and good deeds, as well as their positive impact on society. At the same time, this poem also calls on more people to join in public welfare undertakings and jointly contribute to the harmony and progress of society.
Attached information: Ji Qiaoyan and her team of caring volunteers
Ji Qiaoyan: Honorably retired in 2016 and became a public welfare leader of Qingdao Yuedong Circle. They help those in need around them, respect, love, help, help the disabled, and care for the disadvantaged.
In 2016, in order to build a platform for more young people, she initiated the establishment of "Swallow Integrity Dating Group" to become a cute volunteer matchmaker.
She loves sports and is enthusiastic about sports. In 2018, he participated in the "Qingdao Haier International Marathon" and finished the course with 2:15.
On March 2, 2019, Ji Qiaoyan had her own sports team, "Shile Sports Xiangyan Walking Group", which continues to grow and develop with the concept of openness, inclusiveness, health and mutual assistance. There is no age limit to join the team, as long as you can walk, you can participate in various activities, the oldest of the team is 90 years old, the youngest is 5 years old, they actively participate in and are active in various activities organized by Qingdao Sports Bureau, Shile Sports, TV Station, Qingdao Senior Life Newspaper and other organizations. At present, the team has formed a diversified pattern (marathon team, walking team, Baguazhang team, badminton team, aerobics team, excellent volunteer ambassador team), and she has also been interviewed by TV stations and Qingdao Senior Life News and other media many times. In 2022, the Xiangyan Walking Group won the honorary title of Outstanding Grassroots Team of Qingdao Sports Bureau and was awarded the flag by the Sports Bureau.
Ji Qiaoyan is very filial, and her parents are also people who are kind to thoughts and good deeds. The family style is inherited, and she is particularly affectionate when she meets the elderly in need. Answering questions and solving problems, it can be said that he cares for the elderly, even better than their children. The old people affectionately call her "Swallow" and call her a girl!
The 90-year-old "master" of the Baguazhang Field in Haibo River Park, his belly full of four books and five classics, and his philosophy of life can make the team members participating in the exercise full of harvest every day, and Yanzi and he have also become heart-to-heart New Year's friends.
On March 5, 2023, at the kind request of Yanzi, Principal Wang Jian of Aiyichang provided a free activity venue for nearly 30 uncles and aunts in the Peking Opera class.
In 2019, Swallow walked into a window to open (let the sun shine in) and became a volunteer for the deaf friends, and Swallow regularly led the team to volunteer every week to help them solve their life problems.
*Unforgettable2019.12.3 International Day of Disabilities, Yanzi met with the mother of Chen Xiuying, a national treasure pastry master, Chen's mother saw that Yanzi was hardworking, simple, kind and sunny, and immediately recognized Yanzi as her daughter, and Yanzi felt so happy at the moment of hugging. Since then, love has given them the affection of mother and daughter.
With a strong physique, full of enthusiasm and selfless dedication, the Xiangyan Walking Group has created a beautiful business card for volunteers. When they go there, they pass on their love there, and the flowers and applause they continue to harvest are the best affirmation.
Xiangyan Walking Group embodies the volunteer spirit of selfless dedication, cooperation and mutual assistance, respect for others and perseverance on the road of public welfare. It expresses a noble ideological realm and value pursuit. We wish that under the leadership of Ji Qiaoyan, the Xiangyan Walking Group will better carry forward the physical fitness and public welfare charity, so that the team will have stronger cohesion and appeal, guide more people to participate in volunteer service activities, and make greater contributions to the development of social welfare undertakings and the harmonious progress of society.
About the poet: Li Shunlin, male, born in November 1960, is from Qingdao City. He holds a master's degree from Shandong University, is a member of Qingdao Writers Association, and is currently the deputy director of Shandong Luyi Calligraphy and Painting Research Center and the executive director of Lirenge Culture and Art Museum.
His reportage, poetry, prose, and art criticism have appeared in newspapers, magazines, and the Internet.
Li Shunlin: Poet and art critic, his Tibetan poetry art criticism, with the holographic bearing and emotional wisdom of thinking, innovative and promising, unique literary art. Poetic and broad in art criticism. Respect for tradition, but not stick to tradition, poetry and commentary, poetry is commentary, evaluation is hidden in poetry, poems and texts support each other, complement each other, complement each other, complement each other. He is a poet and art critic. In terms of artistic aesthetics, it can not only achieve the aesthetic appreciation of multiple genres and styles, but also grasp the aesthetic characteristics of various artworks and appreciate the artistic characteristics. It fully demonstrates the aesthetic holographic appreciation talent and style of an art critic!
Poetry evaluator: Sun Zhutian, a member of the Communist Party of China, is currently a member of the Chinese Poetry Society, a member of the Chinese Poetry Society, a member of the Beijing Poetry Society, and a member of the Binzhou Writers Association. He is the initiator of the concept of thinking holographic innovation, the holographic theorist of poetry aesthetics, and the poetry prose poetry review. He is the author of the treatise "Poetry Eyes on the World", the poetry collection "Bright Fragrance", "Poetry is Like the Heart" and the essay collection "Every Day is Called Persistence". In the first half of 2023, the essay will be serialized in the "Writer's Daily".