Dr. Zhong Zhenzhen was born in 1950 in Nanjing. He is currently a professor at Nanjing Normal University and a doctoral supervisor. Director of the Institute of Ancient Literature Collation. He is also the guidance professor of the "Foreign Scholars Chinese Culture Research Scholarship" of the National Scholarship Council, the president of the Chinese Rhyme Literature Association, the vice president of the Global Chinese Poetry Association, the consultant of the Chinese Poetry Society, the general consultant of the "Poetry Conference" of CCTV, the consultant of the poetry platform of "Listening to the Rain in the Small Building", and the distinguished professor of the Wenjin Forum of the National Library of China. He has been invited to lecture at more than 30 famous overseas universities such as Yale and Stanford in the United States.
Zhong Zhenzhen comments on contemporary poetry (8)
——Nine poems by Xiong Dongao
Nichiren ascends the pillar peak of the day
Before Ling Jinding, the slanting sun was already half drunk.
The forest is colored in autumn, and the clouds are born in the late stages.
The influence is invisible, and the immortals are divided.
Qi Feng is more than a group, but it cannot be grouped.
【Comments】
〇 Ancient and simple.
〇 the last two sentences "QiFeng belongs to many meanings, but can not be grouped" especially belongs to the leopard tail, through the Tianzhu Peak to write its maverick spirit.
Linjiangxian Winter Taihe Mountain Stay
Make a little dream of the gods, and you have to peek into the clouds and the high sky. The peaks were ready to soar. It will become a dragon weather, and it will eventually be the root of the Tao. 〇 frost and snow are sharpened by themselves, and bamboo pines are relatively pleasant. Life is only a hundred years. And leave it for three or two days, and savor five thousand words.
〇 The whole four use of the battle, all flow away without delay, is the master of the wheel!
〇 "Make a fairy dream, get a glimpse of the clouds Han Gao Tian" is humorous.
〇 "The peaks want to soar" sentence, not to say that they soar, but "posture", "desire", there is tension.
〇 "Frost and snow add sharpening, bamboo pine is relatively pleasant" a combination, with "self" to "phase" is very work, and the magic is that "self" is not "self" also.
〇 "Life is only a hundred years." And leave it for three or two days, and savor five thousand words. The last three sentences are combined with a number of words, intentionally, but there is no trace of "doing", melting nature.
〇 "five thousand words" is combined with "dragon weather", and the "History" "Lao Tzu Yulong" language is used, which is precise.
Yu Ziwu Angelica, Su Anonymous beckoned Xia Kou, and Wang Beard also came from Yichang to help drink. After a hundred innings, a new round is opened, can it not be completely happy? Long sentences to remember
Hearing that the East Lake Liquor Bureau was open, the old man came down the mountain with a staff.
The rocks and the shore are really pushers, and the single tree is the hegemon.
The liver and gallbladder are exhausted today, and the country and mountains are left to mourn the future generations.
He was fortunate to pay his family and country in his year, and he went to the far side of the yellow sand to be buried.
Note: Pei Zi's new book "One Hundred Liquor Bureaus in Chinese History" was recently published and distributed in China.
〇 wine and ear heat, the poetry of man's own temperament in temperament.
〇 "Liver and gallbladder and poured out today, the country and mountains remain with the future generations to mourn" a joint, heroic and free. Pretending to be decadent, the tail link a stroke of turn, there will be a setback, this "dragging knife meter" also.
Kai Dunhe, QingYin, and Li Bing went to Yiling from Wudang, and their navigation was wrong, and they detoured to Longzhong
The hero of no return asked the ambassador, and the jiangshan was not three points earlier.
Only because I mistakenly entered the Long Middle Road, I did a maolu to take care of people.
〇Dee Chengzhai (Yang Wanli) living method.
〇 Only smart people can be humorous.
Autumn Wudang stayed, hiked to the golden top, with three words
Looking for immortals, hanging dreams through autumn sails.
The ancient road is only one, and the Heavenly Gate is dangerously stacked three.
Peak high Xuan Crane protection, cave purple smoke Han.
I also forget the lovers, the stars on the sideburns.
〇 The first sentence intercepts the Taibai poem "Five Mountains Seek Immortals Without Quitting".
〇 "Hanging Dream", carried out by "Hanging Sail".
〇 the last sentence "Starry sideburns on the hairpin", especially strange and wonderful.
Heavy on Wudang, set sentences, with Xuan Wei scattered people Qiongtai to welcome the autumn rhyme
One
Wan turned back to Wen Jin, and the clan sent Wu Dang.
Guests come to persuade them to drink, sit idle but burn incense.
Bamboo shadow and poetry thin, pine sound with moon cool.
Staying in the changing seasons, I can't bear to avoid autumn frost.
In turn, they are collected from: Song Sushi's "Paintings of the Shaowen Hidden Sect of the Book liu jingwen", Tang Quan Deyu's "Hefang Yin Lang Zhongliu Liu Jiang Han", Tang Dou Gong's "Inscription on the Virgin's Seclusion", Tang Wang Wei's "Spring Above the Matter", Yuan Wang Tingjun's "Absolute Sentence", Qing Niutao's "Baisha Village", Tang Xuhun's "Xiyuan Book", and Qing Ke Shaohui's "Yongju".
〇八音克 harmonious, in one breath, read it as if it were out of his own, almost indistinguishable from it as a set sentence.
〇首聯 "Wan turn back to Wenjin, Fan Fu send Wudang", the sentence pattern is uneven, and the law is flexible. "Wen" is extremely good at "wu", and the magic is not its common meaning.
Second
There are fewer people at the top, and the autumn light is dotted with sideburns.
Dew from tonight white, the mountain looks like last year green.
Bamboo fox peeping into the manhole, pine rose covered wild pavilion.
Holding the qingu drunk, He Endured alone to wake up.
In turn, they are collected from: Tang Jiadao's "Sushan Temple", Qing Yuan Fan's "Passing gray port Yi ci Shi Yushan Mr. Rhyme", Tang Du Fu's "Moon Night Remembrance of Her Brother", Song Luo Gongsheng's "Autumn Hope", Tang Fanggan's "Title Bixi Mountain Zen Lao", Ming ShiJin's "Inscription Painting", Tang Chen Cun's "Danyang Zuo", and Tang Wang Ji's "Two of the Five Songs of the Restaurant".
〇佳處如下 ibid.。 "Dew from tonight white, mountains like last year's youth" a joint, you tianzuo of the union also.
Linjiang Xian read the works of the Wudang Youth Poetry Society, and described the nostalgia with the sentence "Da Yue leads to Qing Zhun"
Qi Zi Nan lian class out, Wan Qing fought for the arch of the Heavenly Gate. Autumn weather is new. The long song is white snow, and the great yue leads to the clear bottle. 〇 Tomorrow I should be better, Toad Frost added three points. Caizhi ferns are common to the mountain people. Xitou sat idly for a long time, kissing with The Evening Peak.
〇上片 cut "Wudang", cut "Youth", cut "Poetry Society".
〇 up the second sentence "杞梓楩楠連類出, Wanqing contend for the arch of heaven's gate", melting narrative and writing scene in one furnace, especially melting without a trace.
Yuan Yufeng and Xuan Wei scattered people Wudang poetry will say goodbye
Listen to the murmur in the depths of the Ten Thousand Peaks, and how many causes are here.
The chanting music is from the sons of the covenant, and the quiet is just idle.
After years of realization, I first heard the Tao, and spent a few days looking at the mountain.
Before parting, he did not speak with the ape crane, and The white cloud brought back a few groups.
〇 "Parting did not speak with the ape crane", and Xu Zhimo's "Farewell to Kangqiao" "Quietly I left, just as I quietly came". "The white clouds carry a few lumps back", on the contrary, "I wave my sleeve and do not take away a cloud."
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