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The super hot theme of the college entrance examination: persistence and transcendence
23. Read the material below and compose as required. (60 minutes)
The two Olympic Games that have just passed have created two "Su Gods".
Su Yiming is a 17-year-old "legendary teenager" who was enshrined in the First World War, and he received a gold and a silver when he first entered the Winter Olympic Games. In an interview with the media, he said: "I love snowboarding, no matter what race I am in, I always do my favorite thing. "I'm a person who likes to constantly challenge and try new things, so no matter what kind of goals I have next, I will continue to give my all to achieve as I do now." "
Su Bingtian is a 32-year-old track and field veteran of the three-game Olympic Games, and many years ago, age has become his weakness, and he has also suffered downturns and injuries, and has considered retiring again and again. But again and again he chose to believe, to stay, to insist. He formulated a rigorous and scientific training plan, broke his original starting habits, and finally ran out of the yellow race limit of 9 seconds 83.
What inspiration does the above material inspire you in your pursuit of ideals? Please grasp the point that touched you the most and write an essay expressing your feelings and thoughts.
Requirements: Combine the content of the material, choose a good angle, determine the intention, self-draft title, in addition to poetry, the style is not limited, not less than 800 words.
【Intention of examination】
【Analysis】This question tests students' writing ability. This question is a task-driven material essay question. The content of the material is about the two "Su gods", the reason why Su Yiming and Su Bingtian are called "gods" is because they have a lot of shining points, and when reviewing the questions, they must find out the merits of the two people, so as to make up their minds. Su Yiming was only 17 years old when he was canonized in the First World War, which can be described as a hero out of a teenager, and he is the role model of contemporary young people chasing their dreams. He has been engaged in the snowboard he loves, it is because of love, so that his pursuit of the road seems to be a lot less boring, therefore, if young people can engage in what they love, in the process of chasing their dreams will have more enjoyment rather than suffering, can make achievements are more likely to make achievements; "I am a person who likes to constantly challenge and try new things, so no matter what kind of goal is next, I will continue to pay my all to complete as I do now" to inspire us, Young people should have the courage to jump out of their comfort zone, have the courage to challenge and work hard.
Su Bingtian is a 32-year-old track and field veteran of the Three Olympic Games, but he can choose to stick to his dreams in hesitation and wandering, so he can't give up his dreams lightly. He formulated a rigorous and scientific training plan, breaking his original starting habits, "and finally ran out of the yellow race's limit speed, which shows that clinging to the dream should also have the courage to constantly challenge themselves and persevere." From the perspective of task-driven analysis, "what inspiration do you have for the pursuit of ideals" actually sets the theme for writing, that is, "the pursuit of ideals", and also sets the writing situation, that is, the writing identity is the young people who pursue the ideal.
"Please grasp the point that touches you the most" requires writing from one angle, not from several angles. When writing, you can first comment on the characteristics of a certain aspect of a certain Su God, and then expound your own perception and understanding on this point. You can use the progressive article structure, from commenting on the characteristics of a certain aspect of a certain Su God, writing about the benefits of this aspect, and finally combining the realistic pursuits of contemporary youth to talk about their own understanding.
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【Reference】
1. It is a kind of happiness to engage in a career that you love.
2. The pursuit of dreams can not be given up lightly.
3. Pursuing your dreams requires constantly challenging yourself.
【Sample high score in the examination room】
Surpass yourself and realize your dreams
The past two Olympic Games have created two "Su gods": Su Yiming is a 17-year-old "legendary teenager" who was enshrined in the First World War, and he won a gold and a silver when he first entered the Winter Olympic Games. In an interview with the media, he said: "I love snowboarding, no matter what race I am in, I always do my favorite thing. For the future, he said: "I am a person who likes to constantly challenge and try new things, so no matter what kind of goals I have next, I will continue to give my all to achieve as I do now." Su Bingtian is a 32-year-old track and field veteran of the three-game Olympic Games, and many years ago, age has become his weakness, and he has also suffered downturns and injuries, and has considered retiring again and again. But again and again he chose to believe, to stay, to insist. He formulated a rigorous and scientific training plan, broke his original starting habits, and finally ran out of the yellow race limit of 9 seconds 83. The example of the two "Su gods" tells us that only by constantly surpassing ourselves can we let our dreams blossom.
Everyone has a dream in their heart, but what is needed to realize the dream is not to look at the ground pointlessly, but to build a ladder and climb bravely.
Many people compare their dreams to long-distance running, which I think is very appropriate. It really takes a long time to surpass your dreams. Long-distance running is always confident at the beginning, and after a lap or two, most people feel tired, and a small number of people slow down, which is like realizing a dream and encountering problems that are not easy to solve. Although they know they need to maintain speed, they always feel that their bodies do not listen to the call, and some even start to walk while running. If this type of person does this when they realize their dreams, they will not be able to realize their dreams halfway. The next fourth lap will be more difficult, but now that they have broken through more than halfway, they will continue to persevere on the track. On the fifth lap, when you were close to success, all the rest of the people were desperately trying to rush forward, and this time it was crucial: if you didn't insist on finishing the sprint, your efforts on the first four laps were in vain; and when you insisted on crossing the finish line, you won. It's also like when you are about to realize your dreams, you encounter difficult problems, no breakthrough, you will lose more regret than the previous halfway people; relatively, you get out of the bottleneck, then you will surpass the dream and realize yourself.
The senseless prospecting mentioned at the beginning is actually daydreaming. At this time, you have dreams but you are not actively implementing them, so you just imagine what will happen when your dreams are realized every day, and you can never enjoy such a good life. Because, anything that looks bright and beautiful on the surface, there must be a person or a group behind it who is struggling hard. This is what comes later as a brave climb. When you watch others achieve a good result, you must not say that he has achieved such a good result because he is smart, and even the smartest person needs to learn and practice as much as you do; when you see others mastering a skill, you must not criticize others, because if you go to study, you may not learn better than him, and you will persist longer than him. When you watch the stout man on the track easily win the first place in long-distance running, you only see the glorious side of winning the championship, but you don't see him trying his best every time he trains, and even lying on the ground and vomiting after running. So, you need to work as hard as most people to achieve yourself and then go beyond your dreams.
There are also some people who will say that I am trying to achieve myself, but I have never seen the dawn of my dreams. There are only two problems, either you haven't worked hard enough; or your dreams are too big to be realized. Then you need to cherish that dream in your heart. Then I thought with great satisfaction: I have at least tried, although the result is not ideal, but I did my best, I did not leave this regret in my life. Now you need a new goal, while you still have a lot of youth, to fight for it to achieve it, to surpass it!
Dreams are not extravagant, but they are also not reality, but efforts to turn the present into the "reality" of your dreams. Dreams are used to transcend, and egos are used to achieve! Let us constantly challenge ourselves, surpass ourselves, and realize our ideals in life!