Introduction: The transfer of the poem is expensive in a turn and a turn, which cannot be similar to the previous sentence, but also must be inherited and connected with the previous sentence
Let's look at the previous issue of The Flying Mountain Poems on 1625:
Night idly against the wind and rain
See which friends have a good sentence:
@123 Old Mei Wu Lin Fu
Seven Absolute Frog Songs
At night, the wind and rain are idle, and the moon is happy to see the dew and lotus.
Admire the first leaves of the lotus pond, and the frogs beat the drums and sing songs.
The last sentence is very interesting, but the transfer sentence "Jing Appreciation" is similar to the meaning of the previous sentence "Xinguan", lacks a turning meaning, and the next sentence is not related, affecting the development of the theme; suggestion: The frog on the bank is not willing to be silent (awkward sentence), always beat the gong and drum to sing a song; beat, can be flat, here to take the flat.
@Chen Yangzhu
At night, the wind and rain are idle, and the scenery is drunk and listens to the birds singing.
And the flowers are picturesque, and there are more flowers today than they were yesterday.
The sentence "Jing drunk", what jing drunk? Without a concrete image, it is an empty hole; the sentence "beautiful and picturesque" is a conclusive statement, without a cause and effect; the last two sentences lack correlation, it is difficult to feel what is "more than yesterday"? Change a few words to see if it can be better:
Idle at night against the wind and rain, and get up in the morning to listen to the birds singing;
Counting the branches and bones, there are more flowers and bones today than there were yesterday.
Look at the picture proposition poem "Spring":
@Zhang's Peace
Look at the picture to write propositional poems
"Spring"
The most beautiful April day on earth, the wind and the sun are beautiful and fresh.
Spring is easy to pass away and difficult to stay for a long time, why not sneak around and enjoy it.
The first three sentences are smooth and cheerful, but the last sentence seems to be not high in style, and it is less interesting; suggestion: Spring light is easy to pass away and difficult to stay for a long time, do not let Shaohuabai pay.
@Jianping 249504053 Liu Jianping
Surviving the cold winter is spring, ushering in the new willow buds of the rising sun.
If there is a fanghua in the heart, I am willing to be a person with an open mind.
It's spring, too vernacular, change a few words:
Survive the cold winter and spring everywhere, usher in the warm willow buds of the day;
If there is a fanghua in the heart, it is a person with an open mind.
Well, it's time for me to make up the sentence, first of all, the sentence syntactic poem:
Sentence: Night idle to the wind and rain, ping ping
Pair of sentences: Talk about the moon cage yarn. Ping Ping Ping Ping Ping
Sentence: The reason for the destruction of the country is difficult to examine, and the servants are flat and flat
Syndication: Black pot when throwing backyard flowers. Ping Ping Ping Ping Ping
The merchant girl did not know the hatred of the subjugated country, and sang the backyard flower across the river; Ha, I really don't know what the original sin of "Yushu Backyard Flower" has become the cause of all the subjugation of the country; the cage, can be ping ke shu, here take the sound of the slang; yarn, flower, ping water rhyme under the ping liu ma.
The reason for the national break is difficult to investigate, and the black pot is thrown back to the backyard flowers; the picture comes from the Internet
Spring, picture from the web
Look again at the picture proposition poem "Spring":
"Seven Absolutes" spring
The cloud light mountain is long; the plain and the servant is flat
Mist freshwater clear flowers and herbs. Servants are equal
Biye is surrounded by red line women, and the servants are flat and flat
The blue sky is only a little black man. Mediocre and mediocre
Red Line Woman, Cantonese opera artist, formerly known as "Xiao Yan Hong", here alludes to red flowers and green grass; black clothes Lang, alluding to Xuan Bird Swallow; Long, Fragrant, Lang, Ping Shui Rhymes Ping Qiyang.
Deva silently floats green water, picture from the network
Style, pictures from the internet
Well, take a look at today's outlink:
Uplink: Dewa silent floating green water, 仄仄平平仄仄
Lower link: Ping Ping Ping Ping
Look at the picture as a propositional poem "Style", the title can add word restrictions, unlimited rhyme, five absolute seven can be.
Looking forward to the wide participation of friends and friends!