Midnight Moonlight (Review Edition)
Text【Kirino】
When the moonlight came by chance
You don't know where you are
Willow Bank? Or the ancient temple gate
He lay down so gently
You used to lie on the couch in a daze
Want to be cold hazy
Clarity with heat
They are all heartwarming lotuses
In the darkness blooms a clear fragrance
Just like the void of time and space
Light a rain of smoke
When the frost recedes
The fire on a winter night is still warm
1, this poem is hidden in the thought of you Although the poem is not divided into sections, it can be greatly divided in poetry as follows / When, the moonlight comes by chance, do you not know where you are Yang Liu'an? Or is it the ancient temple gate / missed by the moonlight (belonging to the suspense show) where are you separated? Should "shi" be the name of "you"? Or "people"? Or "time"? If it is a dialogue with people, poetry is ordinary, if it is a dialogue with time, poetry has another level./ Even so gently reclining on the sofa you have been lying on in a daze Thinking of the cold haze and the clarity of the heat are all the lotus flowers of the heart Blooming in the darkness / The upper section is suspenseful, this section is in front of the eyes, although it is in front of the eyes, with the "sofa" as the connecting point, continuing the mood of thought, the last three lines of contrast form present an intricate emotion, the last two lines of the transference, so that the touch of the sofa, the sense of transfer as the "clear fragrance" of the sense of smell. / Just as the false time and space chaos ignites a smoke and rain When the frost recedes The fire on the winter night still has residual temperature / The first sentence points out the state of mind, likes the last three sentences, full of classical sentiments, especially the word "ignite", not to light the "fire", but the unexpected "smoke and rain", surreal imagination, and the transformation between the virtual and the real, amazing. (Taiwan Xihan Literature Network Xihan)
2. The Han Temple has a temple door like the moon Huatuo dream, even if the golden incense does not continue, the piety is still like a lotus flower / weeping pity between the eyebrows, the province sees the winter to send warmth to the world, looking back at the moment of gratitude; there is also hope to rekindle the expectation of life. (Taiwan Blowing And Blowing Poetry Forum Bingxi)
3, I feel that this poem, on the surface, shows a kind of aesthetic feelings, but in the essence, always looking for a balance and moderation of power, we know that the existence of the world is dialectical, we need to find beauty and peace and our own hearts in dialectics. (Manmatsuura Academy, Big Goose)