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英語學習資料:2014年大學英語專業八級改錯專項訓練2

2014年大學英語專業八級改錯專項訓練2

  Cities can be frightened places. The majority of the population live in noisy massive tower blocks. __1__

  The sense of belonging to a munity tends to appear when you live thirty floors up in a skyscraper. __2__

  Strange enough, whereas in the past the inhabitants of one street all knew each other, __3__

  nowadays people on the same floor in tower blocks even say hello to each other. __4__

  Country life, on the other hand, differs from this kind of isolated existence in that a sense of munity generally keep the inhabitants of a small village together. __5__

  People have the advantage of knowing that there is always someone to turn to when they need help.

  So country life has disadvantages too. For example, shopping bees a major problem and __6__for anything slightly out of the ordinary you have to go for an expedition to the nearest large town. __7__

  The country has the advantage of peaceful and quiet, but suffers from the is advantages of being cut off. __8__

  The city has noise and population which do harm to human health. But one of their main advantages is that __9__ you are at the centre of things and that life doesn’t e to an end even at ten at night. Some people have found a promise be-tween the two: they expressed their preference for the quiet life by leaving for the city and moving to the __10__country within muting distance of the large city.

  參考答案:

  1.把frightened改為frightening。frightened是“受到驚吓的”,表明心理狀态,而frightening表示“令人害怕的”,表示事物性質。

  2.把appear改為disappear。“當你住在摩天大廈的三十層裡”,可以推測這裡要表達的是歸屬感的消失,而不是産生歸屬感。

  3.把Strange改為Strangely。Strangely enough,是固定短語,經常用作插入語,意思是“說也奇怪,最奇怪的是”。

  4.在say前面加上don’t。此處說的是,現在住在同一層樓的人甚至見面都不打招呼。

  5.把keep改為keeps。in that 引導的句子主語應該是 a sense,故謂語應為單數。本句的意思是,農村生活與這種隔絕孤立的生活不同,因為一種歸屬感把小村裡的居民聯系在一起。

  6.把so 改為but/yet。上文提到了鄉村生活的好處,下文是轉折,要用but或者yet。

  7.把for改為on。“去遠征”應該用go on a expedition,而go for 的意思是“去找,努力擷取,擁護”。

  8.把peaceful改為peace。of 後面不應該用形容詞,是以應該改為peace。這裡需要注意的是quiet既是名詞又是形容詞,不要被迷惑。

  9.把their改為its。此處的代詞應該指代上文的 the city。

  10.删除leaving後面的for,或者把for改為from。leave表示“離開某地”,而leave for表示“離開某地去另外一個地方”,for後面接的是目的地。本句說的是離開城市,搬到鄉村,是以for是多餘的。